The inspiration of the book continues to be taken from the Ashok Banker novel: Prince Of Ayodhya. As this is going to be part two of a three park story
Plot:
After the encounter with the Raksha in Cryo-Room Delta, and narrowing escaping, Rama now finds himself running down the long corridor of the ship, looking for other survivors, and help. while running from the C-RD, he hears a human scream echoing through the hallway ahead of him. This is where part tow will take place.
In part two I will dive into a bit of back story for prior events and knowledge. Why the ship is traveling. How long Rama was asleep for. A brief explanation of how and when the Raksha attacked, etc.
This will also be the part of the series where Rama obtains armor and his weapon; the Pinaka Rifle. Rama wont wear all of the armor, but he will wear vital parts of it for protection. He will find a broken audio announcement from during the breach, some 15 hours prior to Rama awaking in C-RD. He will listen and find more information about what is going on in the one of the security rooms. This will be after he follows the scream and witness two giant troll like creatures (very possibly Ravana himself) terrorize and than eat several ship inhabitants. Rama will realize he needs weapons to help defeat these Raksha, and goes to the Security Room Charlie. At the end of this part of the story, Rama will encounter Ravana, although not actively. He be searching for Rama, trying to find and kill him. While he is searching for him, Rama will find and join a force of the Royal Fleet's Security (approximately 100-150 guards) and join the fight against some of the Raksha. Shortly after Ravana will join the battle, and the final part of the story will commence.
Story Motifs and connections:
Rama
Pinaka (Shiva's Bow)
Ravana
Ravana's army of raksasha (Raksha)
The battle between Rama and Ravana
*More details and edits to this planning will be added before the story is posted.*
Source:
Prince of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University of Oklahoma Libraries.
Todd, I really like the idea that you have for your story. I think that the plot line is really good and that you can create a great continuation from what happened in the last story that you wrote. I am looking forward to seeing how you can tie in the characters to the time that you are putting them in.
ReplyDeleteWow, I think this will turn out to be a great story! I think the explanations you want to provide will really help your readers. I think you could also add in internal thoughts of the characters with dialogue or imagery. You could do a lot in part 2. I look forward to seeing what you come up with. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteTodd, I really enjoyed reading your planning. I believe it will turn out to be an amazing story! How you explain it will help the readers understand what you are trying to convey. I think using your resources of images would add a great touch to this story. Just keeping into mind to really develop the characters. Great job, and good luck!
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