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Thursday, April 20, 2017

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The Forest's Cry: Dharma Awakening



This story is a twisted rendition on Lakshmana, the beloved and deeply loyal brother of Rama, from the Indian Epic known as the Ramayana. This story tells of a dark night where Rama and Lakshmana encounter daemons and the horrors they force humans to endure. 



The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One




This story is a space/future sci-fi fantasy rendition of the Ramayana, based off the book: Prince Of Ayodhya by Ashok Banker. I also took some inspiration from the dark space genre from games such as Dead Space and Prey, as well as movies like Event Horizon. I am a big fan of horror space movies. 



The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter Two



Vishnarus' Interior

The story continues with the second chapter of  the dark sci-fi adaptation of the Ramayana. I continue to draw inspiration from many horror games and movies. Recently, adaptations have also come from a show titled Parasyte: The Maxim.

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter Two

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Rama's Determination




The scream echoed throughout the large corridor, reverberating all around Rama as he sprinted. His muscles flexed and relaxed, rippling under his skin like an ocean of power. His torch barely broke through the immense darkness that enshrouded the ship’s hallway.

“Faster. I must protect the people from the Raksha. Faster!” Rama thought, driving himself forward with increased swiftness.
“Faster…”


Several hundred meters later, Rama began approaching the source of the blood-chilling scream. An intersection of hallways was fast approaching. A faint light began to grow visible. As Rama neared the intersection he slowed to a jog. The light of the intersection was faint, but gave enough glow to illuminate the floor and several dozen meters of each hallway of the intersection. Rama turned off his torch to conserve its power as he continued towards the light.

Another scream rang out but was quickly cut off with a loud ‘crunch’. Rama swiftly ran to the left corner of the intersection. He stepped around the edge to face the left hallway. There, to his dismay stood a giant Raksha, its back mostly turned to Rama. It was five meters tall, stooped over a large amount of half eaten corpses and limbs. Its large legs were bloodstained from all the people it had trampled. Just like the last Raksha Rama encountered, it too had three arms. The third was embedded into the lower left part of its back.

In its left hand was visible the torso and legs of the person who had screamed out in horror only moments before. Blood still spouted from its torn belly. Bits of meat hung over the creature’s large hand and blood dripped to the floor.

Rama winced at the sight of another being devoured by this dark force. He pushed down his despair deep into his body. As he did, justice and retribution raged inside him. He stepped out into the middle of the hallway and prepared his body with several fluid arched motions, setting himself into a battle-ready position.

The Raksha sniffed the air, and smelled Rama’s fresh skin. It turned its head to glare at Rama. A deep smile was unnaturally carved into the beasts's distorted snout, one of an animal. Its maw was uneven allowing bone to jet from its skull.  Many twisted horns became visible, crowning the beast’s head.

It spoke with two deep voices at once. “Ah, we have finally drug you out of your hole.”
It turned to completely face Rama now. Rama stared down the beast with great vigor.

“Your tardiness has allowed many of your people to die in horrific ways. You must feel so proud. Rama, savior of the humans. Destroyer of Raksha.”

These words pierced Rama as he grew guilty and angry. The beast looked at its half-eaten meat and tossed it towards Rama. As it landed its bones cracked. It slid only a meter away from Rama. Now the prior human was a pile of wet meat and pointed bones. After a short moment, the beast dropped down to all fours with a ground-shaking thud; rearing its body and preparing to engage Rama.

“…and now you will be gored and killed. I shall bring your remains to Ravanash so he may devour you himself!” 

With that the beast charged for Rama, swiftly closing the fifteen-meter gap between them. Rama was mentally preparing himself as the beast spoke. Quickly Rama slid himself forward, allowing him to grasp the broken femur of the dead body, and lightly place down his torch. With a nimble snap Rama pulled out the broken bone. His body spun clockwise from the momentum. Getting a solid footing, just as the beast was upon him, Rama jumped into the air, thrusting his weapon forward into the forehead of the beast. It pierced into the Raksha’s skull, as it screamed in agony. Rama landed, ducking slightly under the beast as it ran over top him. Its momentum was too much to be able to stop before the blow. Screaming in pain the beast skidded to a halt, grasping at the bone embedded into its brain; hot blood ran from the wound to the ground. It turned around in anger to face Rama again. However, before it was fully facing him, Rama was already airborne. Rama had leaped up for the final strike. With his left arm forward for guidance, he pulled back his right arm, preparing to strike the bone. An aura of radiant light shone around Rama as uncountable number of spiritual arms formed to his body. The essence of Vishnu poured from him that moment. Time and space slowed for an immeasurable amount.

“I shall destroy all who threaten the balance of the Universe. May that which you devour be your doom,” Rama spoke.

With godlike speed Rama struck the embedded femur with his palm, launching it through the head of the Raksha. Bits of flesh and brain exploded from the back side of the creature’s skull as it toppled to the ground. Rama landed lightly atop its head with one foot, briefly posing his body into the Abhaya Mudra.

Rama hopped off the beast’s head and landed back upon the blood-soaked floor. The aura around him slowly faded away.  

“I must find my equipment. I cannot fight all my battles with such ferocity, especially with Ravanash seeking my destruction,” Rama thought to himself.

Rama retrieved his torch and started jogging away from the intersection. Two hundred meters away, on the right side of the corridor was the equipment room for the Royal Fleet Security. When Rama arrived, he noted that the door had been ripped away. He stepped in carefully, shinning his torch’s light through the darkness, evaluating its many lockers. Suddenly Rama’s vision blackened as he fell to the floor. He tried to catch himself but was too weak to do so. Exhaustion overcame him. As his consciousness faded away, the last thing he could make out was a soft rhythmic beeping.

...



Author’s Notes:
 I am pleased with how the story is developing thus far. I have one more part panned, but if the story is not quite finish with another one thousand words I may do four chapters instead. (Part four would just have to be something I do extra, outside the course.) I am finding it slightly difficult to keep the unique horror theme to this story. The detail to the creatures works well I think, but what I am finding hard is the genuine horror aspect. I suppose that just takes some practice for getting acclimated to. Also, I am trying to avoid big cliffhangers, but that too is slightly more challenging with our word restrictions. For the two remaining chapters: chapter 3 will be the journey (now that Rama has his appropriate gear), of Rama traveling to the location in which other humans are fighting back the Raksha and Ravanash. The beeping will be a coded message that was from several hours prior, while Rama was still in Cry-sleep. The final chapter, chapter 5, will be focused primarily on the final fight between Rama and Ravanash. Depending  on the detail of the battle, and the numbers on both sides of the struggle, it might be a condensed or extended chapter.



Source:
Prince Of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University Of Oklahoma Libraries. 

Monday, April 3, 2017

Story: The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One: Bodies and Screams. 




...

Rama awakes as his body topples towards the soaked floor. Natural instincts are all that stop him from falling limp, as he catches himself with his right forearm. Thick enveloping fluid pours from his mouth as he coughs and gags. He is lying at the base of his cyro-pod, which had at some point, been knocked forty degrees off its standing position. Another cracked pod lies atop his, pressed tightly against his pod's control panel. Dazed, Rama coughs out the remaining of the fluid from his lungs. He is disoriented, and there is a loud, high-pitched frequency resonating in his inner ear. After allowing the noise to slowly vanish into oblivion, he stands up slowly. Holding his head, he shakes away his daze, and gazes around. What he sees is the distorted remnants of Cryo-Room Delta. The overhead lights flicker on and off, sending a hypnotic and confusing wave of light upon the ruined chamber. The smell of blood fills the air heavily. A faint sploshing is audible. Rows of pods line either side of the long, narrow room. Each one had been torn open, leaving cryo-fluid drenching the floor. Some pods had been torn from their very station, allowing the cables to spark and flicker, adding to the dance of hypnotic light. Only a few lay erect while most others had been ripped, smashed, or pounded apart, not only from the outside, but from the inside as well. Rama stares at this sight, awestruck and horrified. 

"What has happened?" is all Rama is barely able to say. 

Rama slowly walks from his pod's wreckage. He notices the pod that has fallen atop his had smashed into the release panel.

"Of all things that could have happened...ironic I wasn't killed," he thinks to himself.

 He continues to comb over the remains of C-R Delta, and falls to his knees as he catches sight of another inhabitant. Slumped over, half fallen from its pod lies a dismembered body. A pool of blood lays inches from the stooped over face. Flesh and bits of meat lay in the pool below it. No arms are seen, but the axillary area's bones and tissue are exposed. The flesh was torn away from its back, exposing the lungs and spine. No human hand could have done such a horrid thing. A faint sploshing is audible. Shocked at the sights of such cruelty and pain, Rama gags and vomits onto the floor. He rises again after a short time and wipes away tears and bile residue. 

"This is terrible. I must find the meaning for such demonic actions!" he says aloud. He speaks a short farewell mantra for the body's spirit. 

He begins wading through the stench-filled room, towards the entrance. All the while the hypnotic overhead lights flicker, lighting his way. He comes across several other dismembered bodies, and winces as he looks upon them. He speaks brief farewells to them respectively as he wades past. A faint sploshing is audible. As he reaches the entrance to C-R Delta, there is a steel locker to the left of the steel door. The locker's grated door had been smashed, allowing him to tear open the 'should be locked' cache. Within it he finds a torch: a heavy military grade flashlight, ironically, designed for non-combat situations regarding maintenance with the cryo-pods. He withdraws the torch and tests it. Flawless light pours from it, shining a brilliant white aura onto whatever it touches. Satisfied with the torch and its usefulness, Rama reaches for the door's controls, but nothing happens. Again, he presses the door's release but only a loud buzz rings through the room. Frustrated, Rama hits the door with the end of the torch, making it flicker on, then back off. The sploshing sound stops. 

Rama sighs and bangs his head on the cold steel door.

"Maybe I was meant to perish here after all." he says.

After a moment, Rama realizes the eerie silence of the room. A soft noise, much like something wading through water, reverberates through the long room. Rama, eyes wide, stands paralyzed with his forehead still resting upon the cold steel of the door. Slowly he turns his head to peer behind himself from the corner of his right eye.

Standing hunched over at the far end of the room is a creature. Long black hair runs from its head down to its knees. Two arms fall limp around its thin body. Its face is covered in shadow, but Rama can see its deep red eyes piercing through the darkness of the room. Blood drips from the creature's long nails and curved teeth. 

"Raksha," Rama thinks to himself.

The creature smiles and in a high, distorted voice, speaks. 
"Oooooh, looks like we forgots one, haven't we? Thiss one wont escape either, no."
"No. Kill this one nice and sllloww." 

A third arm becomes visible on the creature's back as it bends down to its hands and knees. Rama turns to face the horror directly. As he does its head rotates unnaturally, giving vision to a smiling mouth with curved, blood-soaked teeth. Screaming, the creature swiftly crawls towards Rama. Rama prepares himself. The creature jumps into the air, as to strike Rama from above. Rama sidesteps at the last moment with detailed precision to the left. With his arm, he grabs the creature's hair at it's skull, and smashes it into the steel door's control panel. The panel sparks and the door opens halfway. The creature is dazed, but as Rama rolls under the door to escape the room, it lunges for him. The door slams back down upon the creature's torso. Rama now stands in pitch dark, in a large hallway leading away from C-R Delta. Turning on his torch, he looks back at the door. The creature's upper torso and one of its arms are split from its main body. 

Wheezing with its own blood clogging its throat it speaks again. "We are only one offf a legion come to ssslaughter your kind. A plague. You shall be eaten alive." 

The creature's eyes watch Rama with delight as he walks over to it, and swiftly smashes its head into the floor with his heel. 

"If such a terrible thing has come, then worse is yet to follow. I must find help!" Rama says aloud. 

He turns and swiftly starts running down the dark corridor of the ship's main hallway. So massive and dark is the path that even his brilliant torch has trouble peering through the dark. With only his thoughts leading him, he races to find aid in the security wing of the ship. 

After a moment a long scream echos throughout the hallway.

A human scream.


...


Author's Note:
This is the first part of many of my multi-genre Ramayana story. I found a lot of inspiration for this short series from things like Dead Space and Event Horizon as well as the fantasy version of the Ramayana by Ashok Banker. I want to allow this to be a 3 or 4 part series that will allow me to dive into a lot of detail within the story. One thousand words max per part is a difficult but doable length to keep it to. If I could, I would fill my stories with as much detail as possible. For instance I have yet to describe in detail the deeply dark mood of the C-R Delta, or even the clothes Rama is sporting! Part two will dive into another short confrontation, as well as weapon and armor collection. The final part will conclude with Rama's epic battle with Ravana. 


Source:
Prince Of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University of Oklahoma Libraries.

Thursday, February 2, 2017

Story: The Forest's Cry

The Forest's Cry: Dharma Awakening 



On the eve of their arrival at the great city of Mithila, Vishvanmitra the sage, Rama and Lakshmana stop for their final night’s rest. A small fire is made in little time. It burns with the branches and leaves cracking beneath, releasing warmth into the air as the embers dance up into the sky. Rama is content as he watches the fire, and listens while Vishvanmitra and Lakshmana discuss the next day’s travels. Their time together burns into Rama as he thinks back on the events since they left his father and home. There is a soft hypnotic pleasure within him as he watches the flame slowly burn out. More contemplation reaches him as he becomes anxious of the days to come, and the conclusion of his adventure. The fire he so enjoyed watching slowly releases its last ember up into the sky and Rama becomes deeply saddened. With his soul still spinning, he quietly rises and moves into the forest for meditation in private. Lakshmana and the sage sleep quietly.


Lakshmana rises quickly and looks around the camp. Closing his eyes, he listens intently, trying to find a horrible scream that came from the think forest. Trying to find another sound of similarity, his ears ring again; another distant and distorted scream echos in his head. He drops to the forest floor with mute silence. He notices the fire died out several hours ago, and that his brother Rama is nowhere to be seen. Vishvamitra sleeps silently near the dead fire. 

After a short time of searching the area surrounding the camp, Lakshmana finds Rama meditation on a large rock in a small clearing in the forest. The sky is slightly visible above him, and the light of the stars and moon softly fall where Rama sits. Lakshmana sees this sight and becomes overrun with peace, feeling as if a godly grace touches him from the sight of his brother, just as the moon’s light envelops Rama. Content in that moment, Lakshmana takes his position at the base of the rock and sits to guard his brother. The memory of the scream he heard, just shortly, melts away.

...

Again, a disturbing sound echoes in Lakshmana’s head and he stands up abruptly. Knowing without a doubt he heard a horrid scream, he draws his bow. Rama does not stir, and that is what Lakshmana wants: his brother to stay in meditation. Once again Lakshmana quietly walks into the forest towards the noise. He continues until another disembodied scream echoes through the forest, this time much louder. His blood freezes, and the warm night air becomes chilled. He begins running towards the scream.

When he arrives, a horrible image greets him: a small village burns. Trails of blood lead from the houses off into another part of the dense forest. A blackened corpse lies on the ground between two of the village's huts. It moves slightly, trying to crawl its way into the forest. Lakshmana rushes to the person, hoping to save them. The moment Lakshmana reaches for his hand the arm decays away into ash. Lifting its head slightly, the body looks at him with dark, colorless eyes. Blood drips from them in the place of tears. The body tries to speak, but instead falls motionless into the arms of Lakshmana. The body dissolves into cold ash. Horrified Lakshmana stands up and begins searching for other survivors. Everything is dead. He heads into the forest, following the blood-stained trail.

Another agonizing scream reaches Lakshmana. He pushes himself faster to reach the cries. As he runs he notices a white figure on his right flank. While still running with haste he turns towards the figure and fires a bolt from his bow. The shot misses only slightly in front of the creature. He stops as he becomes deeply horrified from what he sees. A slow-moving pack of Pretas are accompanying him to the sound of the scream. Their small white distorted bodies move closely to the ground. What were once greedy people are reincarnated into these small, disgusting shells. Their eyes were blackened, mouths sown shut, and their slim arms, legs, and neck protrude out from a swollen abdomen, also sown shut. They moan terrible noises as they all turn to look at him, yet they continue like cattle towards the location of the screams.

Lakshmana shakes away his disbelief, reminding himself that if these Pretas are here, then there must be something equally as horrible further ahead. Again, he starts towards the sounds, sprinting with all his might. The urge to stop these terrible acts being inflicted on humans resonates throughout his being.

When he finally arrives, he sees a pile of burnt and bloodied corpses lying in a giant pile in the middle of a clearing. Blood trails from all directions lead to the bodies. There are several figures heaving the bodies each direction, some depositing the corpses while others drag and carry them away towards a large burning fire. Near the fire are limbs and bones scattered around more dark figures. His body trembles as he watches the daemons devour innocent people.

Rama appears behind Lakshmana, urging him to leave the terrible sight. Rama tells him that there is nothing they can do to save the villagers anymore, for if it was their Dharma, then it was long past. Reluctant Lakshmana and Rama leave heading back to the sage. They return to their campsite silently. As they sit, Lakshmana prays deeply to Vishnu to judge and restore the balance of karma to the villagers, Rakshasa and Preta he witnessed that night. As he does Rama feels a flood of emotions and images rush into his mind of the events that unfolded that night. He hears his brother's voice praying to Vishnu, although not aloud. Rama’s eyes open to see the sage and the sun rise. As they leave, Rama and Lakshmana say nothing about the events of the night to either themselves nor the sage. A fiery passion for retribution and balance burns inside Rama as he feels Lakshmana’s prayers continue while they walk to the city of Mithila.



Authors note's:
The enjoyment of dark twists and partial insights to events and story’s is something I thoroughly enjoy. That is, story’s that do not tell you everything, but leave speculations and bits of information about itself up to the reader to contemplate, deduce, and speculate. I draw my passion for this from the many hours I have spent enjoying horror movies, games and readings: some of my favorite readings come from dark fairy tales of my German ancestry, and the modern urban myths know as creepy pasta’s. Slenderman is one of those dark stories that grabbed a hold of my interests and fears very deeply.

Also, there is a certain pleasure for me to tell about minor characters or those who are not within the main spotlight of stories; such as Lakshmana, Karna, or Balarama. Most of my stories within this portfolio and this blog that are derived from my readings will include such renditions. Main character spin-offs are things I despise, not because they are bad, but rather because there are so many other characters and options for one to imagine and create that are in the background of major stories.

The Forest’s Cry: Dharma Awakening is the conclusion to week two’s story planning, although additions and amendments will surely be added to this and all pieces.




Source: 
The Ramayana: A Shortened Modern Pose Version of the Indian Epic
Author: R. K. Narayan
Published by Penguin Group, New York, New York. 1973. Print (and Web).