Thursday, April 27, 2017

Story Planning: The Razing of Vishnarus: Chapter Three

The Razing of Vishnarus: Descent into Darkness 


The story inspiration continues to come from the Ashok Banker, and his descriptive writing style as well as that of the horror movies and games I have mentioned may times prior. At this point the story feels like it is deeply inspired by the Alien series, which was not directly intended, but not a big issue.

Plot:
Rama will awake after extreme exhaustion overcame him, prior to his fight with the giant, beast like Raksha. Rama will realize how much energy gets drained when he unleashes his 'true' self during a fight. The beeping that awakes him will be that of the broken distress recording sent out during the initial invasion of the ship. Rama was still in Cryo-sleep at that time, and it wasn't until the chaos of the invading Raksha killing and devouring people, that Rama was awoken. Again, the reason Rama was awoken is because in the C-R Delta there was a struggle between a few of the security personal and a Raksha. The Raksha fought and killed the humans, throwing one into a Cryo-pod, which became lodged and smashed into the control panel of Rama's pod. The warm up sequence for the pods take 6 hours to complete. This gave much more time for the Raksha to decimate the majority of the humans and severely damage the ships functions.

This broken distress message will be similar to the one used originally. Some ideas include:

"*Static*... this is...Vishnarus has been...breached...unknown...number. *Static*"

"This is Commander Asheek. Our S.S. Vishnarus has been breached by an known force, The breach site is located on the starboard, specifically the Quarter. All renaming noncombatants immediately evacuate the area. Non-combatants do NOT engage the enemy, I repeat, Non-combatants do NOT engage. All combat and security forces, report to your security wing immediately."





Story Motifs and connections:
Rama
Pinaka (Shiva's Bow)
Ravana (Ravanash)
Ravana's army of raksasha (Raksha)
The final battle between Rama and Ravana



*More details and edits to this planning will be added before the story is posted.*



Source:
Prince of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University of Oklahoma Libraries.

Thursday, April 20, 2017

Portfolio


The Forest's Cry: Dharma Awakening



This story is a twisted rendition on Lakshmana, the beloved and deeply loyal brother of Rama, from the Indian Epic known as the Ramayana. This story tells of a dark night where Rama and Lakshmana encounter daemons and the horrors they force humans to endure. 



The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One




This story is a space/future sci-fi fantasy rendition of the Ramayana, based off the book: Prince Of Ayodhya by Ashok Banker. I also took some inspiration from the dark space genre from games such as Dead Space and Prey, as well as movies like Event Horizon. I am a big fan of horror space movies. 



The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter Two



Vishnarus' Interior

The story continues with the second chapter of  the dark sci-fi adaptation of the Ramayana. I continue to draw inspiration from many horror games and movies. Recently, adaptations have also come from a show titled Parasyte: The Maxim.

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter Two

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Rama's Determination




The scream echoed throughout the large corridor, reverberating all around Rama as he sprinted. His muscles flexed and relaxed, rippling under his skin like an ocean of power. His torch barely broke through the immense darkness that enshrouded the ship’s hallway.

“Faster. I must protect the people from the Raksha. Faster!” Rama thought, driving himself forward with increased swiftness.
“Faster…”


Several hundred meters later, Rama began approaching the source of the blood-chilling scream. An intersection of hallways was fast approaching. A faint light began to grow visible. As Rama neared the intersection he slowed to a jog. The light of the intersection was faint, but gave enough glow to illuminate the floor and several dozen meters of each hallway of the intersection. Rama turned off his torch to conserve its power as he continued towards the light.

Another scream rang out but was quickly cut off with a loud ‘crunch’. Rama swiftly ran to the left corner of the intersection. He stepped around the edge to face the left hallway. There, to his dismay stood a giant Raksha, its back mostly turned to Rama. It was five meters tall, stooped over a large amount of half eaten corpses and limbs. Its large legs were bloodstained from all the people it had trampled. Just like the last Raksha Rama encountered, it too had three arms. The third was embedded into the lower left part of its back.

In its left hand was visible the torso and legs of the person who had screamed out in horror only moments before. Blood still spouted from its torn belly. Bits of meat hung over the creature’s large hand and blood dripped to the floor.

Rama winced at the sight of another being devoured by this dark force. He pushed down his despair deep into his body. As he did, justice and retribution raged inside him. He stepped out into the middle of the hallway and prepared his body with several fluid arched motions, setting himself into a battle-ready position.

The Raksha sniffed the air, and smelled Rama’s fresh skin. It turned its head to glare at Rama. A deep smile was unnaturally carved into the beasts's distorted snout, one of an animal. Its maw was uneven allowing bone to jet from its skull.  Many twisted horns became visible, crowning the beast’s head.

It spoke with two deep voices at once. “Ah, we have finally drug you out of your hole.”
It turned to completely face Rama now. Rama stared down the beast with great vigor.

“Your tardiness has allowed many of your people to die in horrific ways. You must feel so proud. Rama, savior of the humans. Destroyer of Raksha.”

These words pierced Rama as he grew guilty and angry. The beast looked at its half-eaten meat and tossed it towards Rama. As it landed its bones cracked. It slid only a meter away from Rama. Now the prior human was a pile of wet meat and pointed bones. After a short moment, the beast dropped down to all fours with a ground-shaking thud; rearing its body and preparing to engage Rama.

“…and now you will be gored and killed. I shall bring your remains to Ravanash so he may devour you himself!” 

With that the beast charged for Rama, swiftly closing the fifteen-meter gap between them. Rama was mentally preparing himself as the beast spoke. Quickly Rama slid himself forward, allowing him to grasp the broken femur of the dead body, and lightly place down his torch. With a nimble snap Rama pulled out the broken bone. His body spun clockwise from the momentum. Getting a solid footing, just as the beast was upon him, Rama jumped into the air, thrusting his weapon forward into the forehead of the beast. It pierced into the Raksha’s skull, as it screamed in agony. Rama landed, ducking slightly under the beast as it ran over top him. Its momentum was too much to be able to stop before the blow. Screaming in pain the beast skidded to a halt, grasping at the bone embedded into its brain; hot blood ran from the wound to the ground. It turned around in anger to face Rama again. However, before it was fully facing him, Rama was already airborne. Rama had leaped up for the final strike. With his left arm forward for guidance, he pulled back his right arm, preparing to strike the bone. An aura of radiant light shone around Rama as uncountable number of spiritual arms formed to his body. The essence of Vishnu poured from him that moment. Time and space slowed for an immeasurable amount.

“I shall destroy all who threaten the balance of the Universe. May that which you devour be your doom,” Rama spoke.

With godlike speed Rama struck the embedded femur with his palm, launching it through the head of the Raksha. Bits of flesh and brain exploded from the back side of the creature’s skull as it toppled to the ground. Rama landed lightly atop its head with one foot, briefly posing his body into the Abhaya Mudra.

Rama hopped off the beast’s head and landed back upon the blood-soaked floor. The aura around him slowly faded away.  

“I must find my equipment. I cannot fight all my battles with such ferocity, especially with Ravanash seeking my destruction,” Rama thought to himself.

Rama retrieved his torch and started jogging away from the intersection. Two hundred meters away, on the right side of the corridor was the equipment room for the Royal Fleet Security. When Rama arrived, he noted that the door had been ripped away. He stepped in carefully, shinning his torch’s light through the darkness, evaluating its many lockers. Suddenly Rama’s vision blackened as he fell to the floor. He tried to catch himself but was too weak to do so. Exhaustion overcame him. As his consciousness faded away, the last thing he could make out was a soft rhythmic beeping.

...



Author’s Notes:
 I am pleased with how the story is developing thus far. I have one more part panned, but if the story is not quite finish with another one thousand words I may do four chapters instead. (Part four would just have to be something I do extra, outside the course.) I am finding it slightly difficult to keep the unique horror theme to this story. The detail to the creatures works well I think, but what I am finding hard is the genuine horror aspect. I suppose that just takes some practice for getting acclimated to. Also, I am trying to avoid big cliffhangers, but that too is slightly more challenging with our word restrictions. For the two remaining chapters: chapter 3 will be the journey (now that Rama has his appropriate gear), of Rama traveling to the location in which other humans are fighting back the Raksha and Ravanash. The beeping will be a coded message that was from several hours prior, while Rama was still in Cry-sleep. The final chapter, chapter 5, will be focused primarily on the final fight between Rama and Ravanash. Depending  on the detail of the battle, and the numbers on both sides of the struggle, it might be a condensed or extended chapter.



Source:
Prince Of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University Of Oklahoma Libraries. 

Thursday, April 13, 2017

Story Planning: The Razing of Vishnarus: Chapter Two

The Razing of Vishnarus: Rama's Determination 


The inspiration of the book continues to be taken from the Ashok Banker novel: Prince Of Ayodhya. As this is going to be part two of a three park story


Plot:
After the encounter with the Raksha in Cryo-Room Delta, and narrowing escaping, Rama now finds himself running down the long corridor of the ship, looking for other survivors, and help. while running from the C-RD, he hears a human scream echoing through the hallway ahead of him. This is where part tow will take place.

In part two I will dive into a bit of back story for prior events and knowledge. Why the ship is traveling. How long Rama was asleep for. A brief explanation of how and when the Raksha attacked, etc.
This will also be the part of the series where Rama obtains armor and his weapon; the Pinaka Rifle. Rama wont wear all of the armor, but he will wear vital parts of it for protection. He will find a broken audio announcement from during the breach, some 15 hours prior to Rama awaking in C-RD. He will listen and find more information about what is going on in the one of the security rooms. This will be after he follows the scream and witness two giant troll like creatures (very possibly Ravana himself) terrorize and than eat several ship inhabitants. Rama will realize he needs weapons to help defeat these Raksha, and goes to the Security Room Charlie. At the end of this part of the story, Rama will encounter Ravana, although not actively. He be searching for Rama, trying to find and kill him. While he is searching for him, Rama will find and join a force of the Royal Fleet's Security (approximately 100-150 guards) and join the fight against some of the Raksha. Shortly after Ravana will join the battle, and the final part of the story will commence.



Story Motifs and connections:
Rama
Pinaka (Shiva's Bow)
Ravana
Ravana's army of raksasha (Raksha)
The battle between Rama and Ravana



*More details and edits to this planning will be added before the story is posted.*



Source:
Prince of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University of Oklahoma Libraries.

Monday, April 3, 2017

Story: The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One

The Razing Of Vishnarus: Chapter One: Bodies and Screams. 




...

Rama awakes as his body topples towards the soaked floor. Natural instincts are all that stop him from falling limp, as he catches himself with his right forearm. Thick enveloping fluid pours from his mouth as he coughs and gags. He is lying at the base of his cyro-pod, which had at some point, been knocked forty degrees off its standing position. Another cracked pod lies atop his, pressed tightly against his pod's control panel. Dazed, Rama coughs out the remaining of the fluid from his lungs. He is disoriented, and there is a loud, high-pitched frequency resonating in his inner ear. After allowing the noise to slowly vanish into oblivion, he stands up slowly. Holding his head, he shakes away his daze, and gazes around. What he sees is the distorted remnants of Cryo-Room Delta. The overhead lights flicker on and off, sending a hypnotic and confusing wave of light upon the ruined chamber. The smell of blood fills the air heavily. A faint sploshing is audible. Rows of pods line either side of the long, narrow room. Each one had been torn open, leaving cryo-fluid drenching the floor. Some pods had been torn from their very station, allowing the cables to spark and flicker, adding to the dance of hypnotic light. Only a few lay erect while most others had been ripped, smashed, or pounded apart, not only from the outside, but from the inside as well. Rama stares at this sight, awestruck and horrified. 

"What has happened?" is all Rama is barely able to say. 

Rama slowly walks from his pod's wreckage. He notices the pod that has fallen atop his had smashed into the release panel.

"Of all things that could have happened...ironic I wasn't killed," he thinks to himself.

 He continues to comb over the remains of C-R Delta, and falls to his knees as he catches sight of another inhabitant. Slumped over, half fallen from its pod lies a dismembered body. A pool of blood lays inches from the stooped over face. Flesh and bits of meat lay in the pool below it. No arms are seen, but the axillary area's bones and tissue are exposed. The flesh was torn away from its back, exposing the lungs and spine. No human hand could have done such a horrid thing. A faint sploshing is audible. Shocked at the sights of such cruelty and pain, Rama gags and vomits onto the floor. He rises again after a short time and wipes away tears and bile residue. 

"This is terrible. I must find the meaning for such demonic actions!" he says aloud. He speaks a short farewell mantra for the body's spirit. 

He begins wading through the stench-filled room, towards the entrance. All the while the hypnotic overhead lights flicker, lighting his way. He comes across several other dismembered bodies, and winces as he looks upon them. He speaks brief farewells to them respectively as he wades past. A faint sploshing is audible. As he reaches the entrance to C-R Delta, there is a steel locker to the left of the steel door. The locker's grated door had been smashed, allowing him to tear open the 'should be locked' cache. Within it he finds a torch: a heavy military grade flashlight, ironically, designed for non-combat situations regarding maintenance with the cryo-pods. He withdraws the torch and tests it. Flawless light pours from it, shining a brilliant white aura onto whatever it touches. Satisfied with the torch and its usefulness, Rama reaches for the door's controls, but nothing happens. Again, he presses the door's release but only a loud buzz rings through the room. Frustrated, Rama hits the door with the end of the torch, making it flicker on, then back off. The sploshing sound stops. 

Rama sighs and bangs his head on the cold steel door.

"Maybe I was meant to perish here after all." he says.

After a moment, Rama realizes the eerie silence of the room. A soft noise, much like something wading through water, reverberates through the long room. Rama, eyes wide, stands paralyzed with his forehead still resting upon the cold steel of the door. Slowly he turns his head to peer behind himself from the corner of his right eye.

Standing hunched over at the far end of the room is a creature. Long black hair runs from its head down to its knees. Two arms fall limp around its thin body. Its face is covered in shadow, but Rama can see its deep red eyes piercing through the darkness of the room. Blood drips from the creature's long nails and curved teeth. 

"Raksha," Rama thinks to himself.

The creature smiles and in a high, distorted voice, speaks. 
"Oooooh, looks like we forgots one, haven't we? Thiss one wont escape either, no."
"No. Kill this one nice and sllloww." 

A third arm becomes visible on the creature's back as it bends down to its hands and knees. Rama turns to face the horror directly. As he does its head rotates unnaturally, giving vision to a smiling mouth with curved, blood-soaked teeth. Screaming, the creature swiftly crawls towards Rama. Rama prepares himself. The creature jumps into the air, as to strike Rama from above. Rama sidesteps at the last moment with detailed precision to the left. With his arm, he grabs the creature's hair at it's skull, and smashes it into the steel door's control panel. The panel sparks and the door opens halfway. The creature is dazed, but as Rama rolls under the door to escape the room, it lunges for him. The door slams back down upon the creature's torso. Rama now stands in pitch dark, in a large hallway leading away from C-R Delta. Turning on his torch, he looks back at the door. The creature's upper torso and one of its arms are split from its main body. 

Wheezing with its own blood clogging its throat it speaks again. "We are only one offf a legion come to ssslaughter your kind. A plague. You shall be eaten alive." 

The creature's eyes watch Rama with delight as he walks over to it, and swiftly smashes its head into the floor with his heel. 

"If such a terrible thing has come, then worse is yet to follow. I must find help!" Rama says aloud. 

He turns and swiftly starts running down the dark corridor of the ship's main hallway. So massive and dark is the path that even his brilliant torch has trouble peering through the dark. With only his thoughts leading him, he races to find aid in the security wing of the ship. 

After a moment a long scream echos throughout the hallway.

A human scream.


...


Author's Note:
This is the first part of many of my multi-genre Ramayana story. I found a lot of inspiration for this short series from things like Dead Space and Event Horizon as well as the fantasy version of the Ramayana by Ashok Banker. I want to allow this to be a 3 or 4 part series that will allow me to dive into a lot of detail within the story. One thousand words max per part is a difficult but doable length to keep it to. If I could, I would fill my stories with as much detail as possible. For instance I have yet to describe in detail the deeply dark mood of the C-R Delta, or even the clothes Rama is sporting! Part two will dive into another short confrontation, as well as weapon and armor collection. The final part will conclude with Rama's epic battle with Ravana. 


Source:
Prince Of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University of Oklahoma Libraries.

Thursday, March 30, 2017

Week 10 Story Planning: The Razing of Vishnarus

Story Planning: The Raze Of Vishnarus




Conceptual Idea:
Rama's Dream / Alternate Version

Inspiration/Source:
In the Ashok Banker novel Prince Of Ayodhya, Rama awakes to an unseen threat, which launches him into high alert and a ready to kill mindset. After this a disembodied voice speaks to him sending him to a dream world foreseeing the horrors waiting to be unleashed. This ended up being Ravana speaking to him, within a dream. Awakening, Rama finds nothing wrong. 

I want to take a flip of this dream where Rama again has a nightmare but this time is teleport  into a space station traveling through the expansive cosmos. The ship is a City Ship, meaning it has a large population of vital humans. The forces of Ravana breach the space ship, laying waste to all humans aboard: devouring and brutally slaughtering all inhabitants on the ship. 

Character and Plot:
Rama will awake from one of the cryo chambered used for the sake of preserving the inhabitants on their long journey. Rama awakes to see the cryo-room torn apart and blood spewed across the hallway and floor. Another pod had been smashed against Rama's cryo pod, protecting him from detection and initiating the warm up sequence. This takes 11 hours to completely revitalize and adjust the specimens vitals to appropriate levels.  Rama locates the weapons room for the ships security, and equips himself with one of the modified Pinaka Rifles, as well as some slight armor. He finds a broken transmission and begins to investigate the ship for what is happening. He eventual comes across body's and several enemies and begins his struggle to reach the remaining inhabitants before they are completely slaughtered. 

Details:
Rama is a member of the Royal Fleets Prince Class Security, Nicknamed the Ksha (kay-shaw)

"We have been...-ched! I repeat... -Breached!" "They are...in from the...ear of the shi-..."

Ship Name: S.S. Vishnarus
Gun Name: R3 Pinaka Rifle. Fires super charged electric rounds capable of melting steel.
Ravana's Forces: Dark Ones
Ship Security: Royal Fleet 'Prince' Class Security (RFS) 



Story Motifs and connections:
Rama
Ravana (disembodied voice)
Ravana's Army of Raksha
Dreaming*
City(Ship) Under Siege
Pinaka (Shiva's Bow) *Side note: Does it break?*


*More Details to be added before the story is posted*

-Edit 1: This will more than likely turn into a multi part story, spanning a few weeks. 


Source:
Prince Of Ayodhya
Author: Ashok K. Banker
Published by Orbit (Time Warner Books UK), June 2005. Great Britain. Print. University Of Oklahoma Libraries. 



Wednesday, March 8, 2017

Growth Mindset: Staying Busy to Stay Productive

Growth Mindset: Staying Busy to Stay Productive


Everyone has to work to achieve the growth mindset that is ideal for themselves. For myself, this practical learning and work style is still being polished. For chart we evaluated for this class, it is apparent to myself that there are a few aspects I must work on to complete my mindset. Specifically 'setting your own schedule and priorities' and 'taking risks' are two of those aspects. My scheduling issues comes down to some things I am working on personally, not just for school: which is Time Management. The big TM that always seems to give me a bit of trouble. Setting time aside to work on projects, homework and and other components of my day is very hard. As much as I love a structured and well planned day, I always seem to retain my 'relaxed and unplanned' habits. This is something I plan on using this class to help correct; with the balance of freedom and structure. Paying closer attention to given tasks and not procrastinating will help with the mindset. Setting scheduled alarms and times for work, school, assignments and other activities will be a way to aid the progress.

Now that I am getting more and more into H&W Coaching and Person Training, scheduling clients and practice sessions is consuming a lot of my day, leaving the rest for the time to be productive. I put a lot of pride into establishing rapport with clients and practice clients to ensure the best possible session. Staying busy working with others in this aspect helps me maintain productivity in my off time.